You are my world!
none else have made me feel this empty!
Life without you… is incomplete
I miss you… dearly!
I have made a habit of thinking of you,
nights and days apart!
My heart is full… and heavy…
It can no longer keep this riddle tight!
I am falling apart…
Scared… if am actually… in love with u!
Okey… I admit…I am!
It has been long since…
I have saved these 143 red roses for U.
Tell me….
Can I gift you my life?
Its time… we move hand in hand!
One soul ... one heart!
Love you .... dear!....
Yours and only yours....
02/06/2007
2 comments:
Just a suggestion, I think your poems would be more beautiful if you didnt use, "..." instead of usual punctuation marks.
Thanks Unni, I know It has been a very long time, yes ur comment is very true. but i guess I am trying to include sm trademark individuality the '...' thing is not being used as a punctuation, just as a time-gap in between the words.
Post a Comment